The temptation with these stories (since when you recieve the last snippet you only get to read one step back) is to make your snippet as random as possible. But I think the reason that this story is good is because it actually stays pretty on track. Themes: physically abnormal boy likes physically abnormal girl, love unreturned or prevented by large physically abnormal guy, depression that comes as result, epiphany through supernatural means or self-mutilation. The ingredients of any good story.
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